not too shabby
okay, I'm not sure what style of metal this is intended to be. Up until about 40 seconds i thought black metal (plus the lyrics are pretty black metalish), but when the drums broke out and the lead guitar came in with the licks, it began to sound more like melodic death metal. If you're going for black metal, I'd suggest having the guitars doing more tremolo picking rather than chops. And the vocals are harshly shrieked in the traditional black metal style, but lower growls are better suited for melodeath.
ps, compliments on the production. very well mixed, and I like how the bass guitar is noticable. my only complaint there is the guitars would do well to be just a little bit louder.